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Pardon My French: You Suck At This

 

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In the literary world, translators are low in the pecking order. Titans like Milan Kundera and Isaac Bashevis Singer have branded them traitors for betraying the beauty of the original text, so most keep their heads down and hew closely to the source material. In their 2007 version of "War and Peace," translators Richard Pevear and Larissa Volokhonsky preserved Tolstoy's use of "wept" seven times in a single scene. But hold on a minute—is such slavish devotion really the right approach?

No, says Douglas Hofstadter, Indiana University's Pulitzer Prize–winning cognitive scientist, who moonlights as a translator. In an afterword to his third work, Françoise Sagan's "La Chamade," he issues a cri de coeur, urging his brethren to become "co-progenitors"—Ella Fitzgeralds to the author's Cole Porter, as he puts it— who must take liberties or risk failure. In "La Chamade," he punches up flat dialogue, refines blurry descriptions and injects dozens of ready-made phrases (such as "bit his tongue" for "he said nothing") and weird Americanisms ("if that doesn't take the cake!"). Hofstadter even tweaks the title from "Wild Heartbeat" to "That Mad Ache"—in part because it's an anagram of "Chamade."

Hofstadter is already a divisive figure in the translating community—"He has absolutely no ear," Mikhail Gorbachev's translator Richard Lourie once wrote—and his latest essay is likely to fuel a literalism debate that has reignited in recent years. Presentations tackling "Servitude or Collaboration?" at the annual American Translators Association conference have nearly doubled since 2007. Hofstadter, for his part, is undaunted. "If I had to suppress myself," he says, "I wouldn't bother." Let the war of words begin.

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  • Posted By: quintabelina @ 08/09/2009 11:56:46 AM

    I'm afrid this "translator" is injecting his envy and all negative attitudes into changing the author's words (which is what interests us and NOT his opinions)...... LEAVE THE WORK ALONE! you are only to translate, not to add or change text, what gall! If any of my work was changed by a translator thereby causing people's reception to change as well, I would sue! Why does he get any work at all? Is there no canons for this? (As a certified translator myself, I find his actions unlawful and most disrespectful to the author's he's "translating"- we would be fired for this)- literal translations don't work, you loose so much and don't gain the essence of the words, yet this is not longer translation, this is re-writing and should not be allowed.

  • Posted By: TheGardener @ 05/06/2009 6:52:46 PM

    Well Antinea, when translations are taking place the question always remains...do you literally translate or...do you translate the substance within the sentence.
    I am sure if the Substance of the Sentences of Sagan's writings had been translated, the English reader would have known the real Francoise Sagan.

  • Posted By: Antinea12 @ 05/02/2009 5:25:29 PM

    I have not read Mr Hofstadter's translation. However, I am very familiar with Francoise Sagan's work in the original since I grew up and lived in France until my mid-twentis. "Flat" dialogues, muted descriptions and blurry backgrounds are essential to F. Sagan's novels. This so-called translator's insistence on "punchy dialogue" and americanisms can only bring to mind the sad epigramme: "Traduttore, traditore". What a shame that American readers will never know the real Francoise Sagan!

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